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Tuesday, November 1

Roadkill on the Path to Salvation

(I selected this post to be featured on my blog’s page at Poetry Blogs.)


I teach Spanish now, and at school that translates:
someone who is good at this one language,
as if I live in a piece of luggage packed
with workaday words and plain phrases,
as if there's a black cloud of vowels and R trills
buzzing around me like malaria mosquitoes,
and no one can see past the swarm. Sometimes I talk
about a good book I'm reading. If it's a novel, my reward
is a smile from the gal with a teaching award
and a look that says, "Good Señora,
keep trying!" If it's poetry, smiles collapse
like small countries to a coup, new topics
queue up. Sometimes English teachers trade
daft looks when I name William
Carlos Williams, then clear off to budget
the yearly author visit. When "poem class"
comes around (also once a year), our Language Arts team
won't let me near. They shut classrooms tight,
pull the dusty sheet off that famous Frost piece,
as if revealing a prize trophy from glory days,
then beat kids with it so hard, most want to take
any road but the one that guy is on.


(in Rattle #36 Winter 2011)





7 comments:

  1. This poem made the shortlist for the 2011 Bridport Prize: http://www.bridportprize.org.uk/

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  2. Thank you for joining Poets United. I have added your blog to our blogroll so others can discover you and your wonderful poetry. Poets United is what you make of it so explore, comment often and it will lead to folks doing so in return. We look forward to visiting your blog and reading your poetry.

    Your imagination is what fuels our community.

    ~ Robert Lloyd

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  3. I really enjoyed this poem. Rattle is a tough nut to crack, you should be proud. I am 0-3 in my attempts to get in. :-)

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  4. Thank you, Danny. So nice of you to say so. And don't give up on submitting to Rattle.

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  5. Liking the casual language and clever line breaking in this poem, thanks for posting.

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  6. The ending of this poem is great. I also agree wholeheartedly that poetry in school is a joke. No romanticism, no decadent poets, no Eliot, just that one horrible Frost poem. I know I sure as hell didn't want to take that road either. Nice work.

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